Walt write a colour poem
Red
Red is the sunset that fills the dark,
Red is the flames that claims the night,
Red is strawberries that made me think of cherries.
Red is Ruby that fills me with beauty,
Red is Blood that sounds like flood.
Red is Lava that makes me think of guava.
I love Red because it’s Beautiful.
Kia ora Antonette, you must really like red. I like how you made lots of metaphors about red. Next time you could make more topic related rhymes.
ReplyDeleteThanks Rheanna! I'm not very good at rhyming,but I will try to put more topic related rhymes about red.
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ReplyDeleteHello Antonette,
ReplyDeleteI like your poem about red. You have used some descriptive words which good so someone will read it. Maybe next you could add some pictures.
Hey Antonette,
ReplyDeleteI like your poem. My favorite part was when you said that the blood was like a flood. But when you said your poem with strawberries I felt hungry. But any hoo great poem. but one question did it take you so long to find some rhyming words.