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Thursday, 22 March 2018

Jerminu's Day

WALT: See some differences of how we live in our country and how people live in Timor Leste.

4 comments:

  1. Hi Antonette its Ian from yaldhurst model school.
    I liked how you picked photos to go with your slide.
    Maybe next time you should add why you posted it.
    Did you enjoy posting this ?

    Kind regards Ian

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  2. Hi Antonette! My name is Mia from Yaldhurst Model School, this post has a lot of information. I also like the way that the slide compared what is difference between Jerminu and us.

    It seems like it is harder work there, but some things are the same to here.

    There are some parts that you need to finish of or delete to make it perfect. Everything else is fine though.

    Great work!
    Mia

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  3. Hi Antonette its Simon from st bernadettes school I would like to say that going through your slides was very fun and interesting. your slides were done well and authentic and you had sentences that were all complete.Something I think you should work on is putting pictures of your own and making it stand out more clearly but the rest was good and it showed that you were putting a hundred percent into it

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    1. Hi Simon! I'm glad that you found our slides fun and interesting to read! I'll make sure that next time in teams or individual works that I will add more pictures of my own! Thank you for the feedback!

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