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Friday 29 March 2019

Innocent or Guilty?

WALT:  Know how to write a news paper report.
In Room 6 we read a book called "Pig the Pug" We had to make a newspaper report about it. We can take any perspectives and write about it. I chose to write about when Pig the Pug falls out of the window.

Something I found hard: was trying to end the story. Another thing I found hard was using interesting vocabularies to hook the reader in.

Something I found easy: was writing the story(except the end) because I could be creative.

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Pig the Pug’s Accident

 It was on a Wednesday March 22nd 2019 that Pig the Pug had his accident. Everything was going well during his day until the accident. A bystander(who does not want to be named) said that when the accident happened Trevor, Pig the Pug’s flatmate, was there with him this is where a question pops up, Is Trevor Innocent or is he guilty?


 Trevor the Sausage dog
After a bystander said that Trevor was there with Pig the Pug, he is interviewed. “No, I am innocent and I did nothing but stand there and listen to Pig until he falls.” Trevor says. While we interview Trevor more there are things happening in the hospital where Pig the Pug is.


 Pig the Pug
 “Don’t believe Trevor, he took one of the toys from my stack which made my stack unstable! He cause this!” Pig the pug says. But is Pig telling the truth or is he trying to frame Trevor? Right now we have two questions that are left unsolved, Is Trevor really innocent or is he guilty? Is Pig the Pug telling the Truth or is he trying to frame Trevor? We aren’t sure if Trevor is the one telling the truth or if Pig is telling the truth.

 Bystanders 
After interviewing Trevor and Pig, we decided to look for any bystanders to look at different point of views. “I think it was just an accident, Trevor was just watching as Pig falls, no one expected this.” A bystander across Pig the Pug’s flat said. “I think Trevor let his anger get the best of him and decided to pull one of Pig’s toys from the bottom and watch Pig as he falls off their flat window.” We aren’t sure which side to believe. Because our team is very confused with this situation, Trevor was put into trial along with Pig and the bystanders. As things get more suspicious, we are waiting for the results the trial will bring

 Trial 
Today Trevor,Pig and the Bystanders were taken to court. “I swear Trevor pushed me!” Pig shouted “Excuse me Pig, but you were the one who was not thinking and made that unstable stack of toys!” Trevor snapped. After the trial, Trevor was found guilty and will be punished he said this “I’m tired of you Pig! You always blame me for the things you did wrong! This is why I did this!” Trevor took one of the toys from the bottom of Pig’s stack which made it unstable and make Pig lose his balance.

3 comments:

  1. hi Antonette
    I really like how you put alot of paragraths
    mabe next time you could not put tittles on every paragrath

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    1. Hi Gustan!
      Thanks for the feedback! I'll make sure that next time I won't out that much headings for each paragraph. Did you see any other mistakes I could fix? If not it's alright! Thanks again for the feedback!

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  2. Hi Antonette :)
    I loved that you used a lot of questions to hook the readers into your writing! Maybe next time you could link the paragraphs that could possibly work with the previous paragraphs.
    Keep up the amazing work!
    -Telesia

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