WALT: Compose a poem about the Waterslide.
Splashy waterslide
Laughs and Screams filled that one spot. The waterslide.
People patiently waiting for their turn and talking to their friends.
The air was just filled with excitement feelings.
As people slid down, water splashed.
People began to get muddy, laughs were heard as they shrugged off the fact they were muddy.
This moment was one of the memorable things I observed during camp.
Monday, 12 November 2018
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Hi Antonette,
ReplyDeleteCool poem about the waterslide at camp my favorite part was near the end.
Just take away the full stop at spot.
keep the hard work up.
Micah