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Thursday, 1 March 2018

Fat Cactus


WALT: Write a limerick with a buddy.

Fat Cactus
There once was a Cactus
Who had a hat
He was very very fat
The cactus ate a praying mantis
and then died because of laying lantis



2 comments:

  1. Hey Antonette,
    What a poor cactus! I wonder how he got so fat?
    I really like your title and the image you have chosen, it made me want to click on your post. I am wondering if the size of the text is correct - it is very big and I have to scroll to read the whole thing. I would much prefer to see the image the the text on one page - What do you think?
    Look forward to hearing from you,
    - Miss Morgan

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  2. Hi Antonette, i really like the way that you made the font bigger it really stands out. Well done antonette their is no mistake in your writing.

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