Writing To Describe(Unfinished)

WALT: Use a range of figurative language to describe a moment in time.

I was tired,alone and cold. Where was I? I stumbled upon a house. It was old. Well it looked like it was old because the walls were cracked the painting was almost gone and the tree leaves laid on the ground like a dead person, the plants were overgrown. It was abandoned. I wonder what happened. Without thinking I entered the old house. The inside of the house looked like a tornado has went past it. There were pieces of wood on the ground, there was broken pieces of the house everywhere, but I decided to keep walking. I checked one of the rooms and it wasn’t any better. I went to look around more, the more a looked around the more I was feeling someone was in here too. I stopped. I looked around the room and saw a shadow in the hallway. I froze. I didn’t know what to do nor what the thing that had the shadow was. I was just standing there frozen like a statue. But when I heard a dreadful noise my senses came back. What was that? I ran out of the room. I ran like my life depended on it, because right now my life probably depended on it. I ran to the front door but it was locked.