Character Description

WALT: Write a character description using 'show not tell' in our writing.

In Room 6 we read a book called 'Pig the star' We had to write character descriptions about either Pig or Trevor(Pig's Sausage dog friend) I wrote my character Description about Trevor.

Something I found hard: was writing my character description with the 'show not tell'
Something I found easy: Was creating the sentences that were needed to make the paragraph



Trevor -  He has floppy ears that cover the side of his head. Trevor has sausage like body along with small legs. He has a small tail like a stick. He shows this gloomy feeling by his eyes because of being with pig so much. His snout is long with a black nose at the end of it.

 Trevor is a very quiet dog, he isn’t like Pig he doesn’t want to be the centre of attention. He is very compassionate to others including Pig even though Pig hasn’t been treating him the best. He is a shy dog and lets Pig have the attention. He would only have the confidence to shine when he can, but if he does shine he would still be humble and kind towards others and Pig.

 Trevor is a disciplined dog which makes Pig do whatever he wants to him. Trevor is also forgiving which causes Pig to continue being big headed. He tries to ignore Pig’s rude and careless behaviour which makes Pig irritated. Trevor’s quietness makes Pig more confident and steal his limelight. 

Trevor’s a very organised dog, like some type of perfectionist. He doesn’t like to see his things out of place, if he does see one thing out of place he would put it right back where it belongs. He isn’t that type of person who would leave his clothes laying around the floor. He likes to put his belongings where he can find them easily when he needs them.