Character Description(Mother's day)

WALT: write a character description using 'show not tell' in our writing.

In Room 6 we have been learning about writing Character Description. For this writing we had to write a character description about our mother or another significant female in our lives. I choose my mum because Mother's day is coming up. We had to write four paragraphs describing their Physical Features, their Behaviour, reputation(how this person affects other people) and Environment and Belongings(How this person likes their surroundings)

What I did well: Using a different language in my writing to make it more interesting(I used Tagalog/Filipino)
What I enjoyed: Writing about my mother.
What I need to work on: Finishing faster but with a lot of detail.


My Mother,

 In the year 1978 and child named Liezl entered the world, now she is my mother. Your smile is bright and cheerful. Your eyes are always shining making it look like you have the stars in your eyes. Your black medium length hair is always tied and fluffy.

 You always use your calm voice even though you are annoyed. You spread your positiveness around and put everyone in a good mood. You never let us go through anything alone and will do anything to make us happy. You would work hard for us to give us the things we need in life.

 You always try your best to cheer us up if we were feeling down. You always put others before yourself. You like taking care of others and making them feel like a someone. You have a very passionate heart. You know when we are not feeling the best and you would try your best to comfort us.

 My mum likes to have a clean environment so she would ask us “Gawin niyo na yung mga gawaing bahay!” (Do your chores) and we would always reply with “Wait lang!” (Wait) but we would always end up not doing our chores, but she will still love us the same way.

 My mum is very caring. We love her very dearly. Mahal Kita Mum!(I Love you mum)

 -Antonette